No comments except the fact that Kaliqksen has got to be one of my favourite ophanim ever. I cannot write for his dialect, I have to get help from Jay. It's incredibly stylized but it's charming to an extreme. Since he's terse, it really only comes out in longer form interaction like the dossier 'questionnaire' we filled out in character for each of the ophanim that talk. He's not slated to appear for a while but he might fall into some of those 'random ophan does while narrator speaks' slots before he arrives in the main plotline. As long as it has to do with being freaky fast and violent, I mean.